Before we begin this
weeks insanity, lemme just say this:
AGUDSFLBGSJNAETFKLGUHGDSKLB!
WHY THE FLYING FUCK
WOULD ANYONE WRITE THIS BOOGUS?!
Y'all know the
Hunchback of Notre Dame, right? Y'all remember how Frollo looked
like, right? Well, this author thinks Frollo is a major fucking
hunk-a-licious sex-god and has written a twelve-chapter long story of
him and Esmeralda, yes THAT Esmeralda, having sex 24/7 before finally
getting married...
THERE'S SO MANY ERRORS
IN THIS LOGIC THAT IT MAKES ME WANNA LOBOTOMIZE THE AUTHOR WITH AN
ICEPICK AND WOMIT INTO THE HOLE!!
And did I mention she
hates Pheobus?... Bitch, don't make me fucking cut you! He's one of
the best characters ever, and anyone who wanna know WHY she hates
Pheobus? Because he didn't realize that the pendant Quasi recieved
from Esme was a map, and ”all he wants to do is to have sex with
Esmeralda”... Wait, so does Frollo, apparently? FUCK LOGIC! PHEOBUS
IS BEST CHARACTER, PERIOD!
Anyway, I'm NOT gonna
go through all the chapters, so I'm choosing the most fucked up part
of the entire story: the wedding night.
Previous in the
chapter, they were getting married. But in order to do so, Esmeralda
would first have to get baptized. BECAUSE APPARENTLY IT'S OKAY, in
the eyes of God, TO FUCK EACH OTHERS BRAINS OUT AS LONG AS YOU BELONG
TO DIFFERENT RELIGIONS, BUT NOT TO GET MARRIED!!
Oh, and Esmeralda has
indoor plumbing in her bathroom in chapter 2-3 something... I fucking
LOVE the non-existing logic!!
Anyway, let's see what
fucked up sinnery they're concocting for the wedding night, eh?
Bittersweet (chapter 8) by
Gothika Faerie
Night falls…
After a sumptuous wedding dinner for the newlyweds, Frollo
earnestly led her to their wedding bed. Esmeralda did not know
whether to hang her head like a martyr or show how excited she
actually was. She remembered him telling her last night's frantic
fornication was a small preview to what she would be getting tonight.
She blushed hotly at the thought.
(Oh, and I forgot to mention: the reason Esmeralda is marrying
Frollo is because:
He raped her after murdering Quasimodo
She liked it
To save her family and friends/the other gypsies
The author wanted to have a reason to write this
faggotry
Because FUCK LOGIC!)
Frollo gently prodded her into the room before shutting and
locking the door securely. He wanted no rude interruptions to disrupt
their consummation. Granted, they had already made love numerous
times. However, this night was the most important. This night he
would show her that no other mortal man was capable of pleasing her
as much as he could. Oh, how he looked forward to this.
Esmeralda was captivated by the romantic adornments in the room.
They were rose petals sprinkled all over the bed. They contrasted
beautifully with the black, satin sheets and mahogany bed frame. The
fireplace was lit and blazing in all its intensity. She knew this
night would be very interesting.
(Interesting indeed, for little did she know that he was about
to burst out into spontaneous singing to the fireplace in just a few
moments)
He soon approached her, a lewd, libidinous look on his face.
Esmeralda shrank back just a little at the heat he was projecting.
Frollo smirked and ordered her to undress. Esmeralda stiffened
slightly before turning her back. Her dainty fingers nimbly pulled
the tight knots loose before allowing the dress to unravel off her
frame. Frollo watched hungrily at the white lace opening up,
revealing more and more of her smooth, sandy skin.
Esmeralda slid each sleeve off of her shoulder, one at time in the
slowest, most sensual pace. She hooked her hands on the bodice and
pulled it down, exposing her ripe bosom and slender waist. Finally,
she pushed the gown right off her hips and thighs, letting the
delicate silk and lace fall limply around her ankles. Blushing, she
turned, her lustrous curls framing her rosy cheeks.
Frollo couldn't believe how obedient she was being. The witch
certainly had learnt how to behave herself. He strode towards her,
removed her veil and watched her in all her naked loveliness. His
spidery fingers cupped her jaw line, sliding sensuously down to
stroke her neck, over her tense shoulders, lingering around the
curves of her luscious breasts before going back up to thumb the
outline of her rosy lips.
Every hint of flesh he caressed left a smoldering sensation
building within her core. She shuddered as he leaned in to nip her
neck, drawing just a little blood before licking it away, relishing
her tangy flavor. His lips trailed downwards to suck on the beginning
of the valley between her bouncing breasts. The feeling of her warm
skin beneath his ravenous lips turned him on greatly. Also her husky
gasps and sensual moans didn't hurt either.
(Hang on to your hats, ladies and gentlemen...)
"Lie on the bed," He demanded, letting his rich baritone
drop to an aroused growl. His deep voice left goose bumps littering
her frame and she shivered before consenting to his request. The
pliable, velvety black sheets felt delicious around her voluptuous
frame and she writhed and wriggled on the bed, shamelessly enjoying
their softness. Frollo bit his lip watching her rubbing every inch of
her sun kissed flesh against the sheets, hoping to be under her later
on.
He started divesting himself of his own clothing. Esmeralda sat up
against the comfortable pillows to look at his magnificent hands
pulling his swallowing black robe off his pale, lithe frame and
unlacing the laces that held up his undergarments before flinging
them to some dark corner in the room. Esmeralda's green, knowing eyes
roamed all over his anatomy. Yes, he had been naked before her many
times but this time; she actually could examine and enjoy all he had.
The fireplace glow somewhat lit up around him, making him almost
god-like.
(Claude Frollo: Sadistic judge a la Westboro Baptist Church at
day, MOTHERFUCKING SEX-GOD at night)
Frollo wondered at Esmeralda's intense staring and couldn't help
but grow just a little anxious. He did not know why seeing that in
their previous encounters, she had thoroughly enjoyed herself.
However, he still felt somewhat insecure that she was finally
noticing how age had ravaged him. Frollo tried to maintain a
reasonable physical build but he knew he was nowhere as taut or as
toned as the young soldiers he recruited. Combined with the wrinkles,
crow's feet and dark circles around his eyes, he knew perfectly well
he was far from being considered dashing.
His insecurities disappeared almost immediately when she crawled
towards him and ran her palms down his toned, slim chest. A
come-hither smile was tugging at the corners of her ruby lips. She
left moist butterfly kisses along the sinewy muscles, running her
hands around his nicely chiseled abdomen. She lovingly rubbed her
soft, small fingers against the scant patch of silver hair in the
middle of his chest. She was not a fan of chest hair but the thought
of someone so sophisticated to possess such a manly quality turned
her on.
(… Really?)
He grabbed her wrists and pressed her back down upon the velvet
sheets. How he brimmed with joy at the sight of her panting and
flushed on his bed. Their bed. His lips soon crashed against
hers passionately, ravenous to kiss her the moment they entered this
room. Esmeralda moaned longingly and her tongue broke through their
lip-lock to meet his. They lay there, him straddling her as their
tongues danced a ferocious tango within the stage that was their
hungry mouths.
His lips broke away from hers, earning him a mournful sound at the
loss of contact. Smirking, he licked a blazing trail up the side of
her neck, careful to brush against that same fiery spot he once
stroked, before nibbling at her earlobe. Esmeralda was whimpering at
his mouth's every action. All of a sudden, he started to lift himself
off of her. She made a little whiny sound before pulling him back on
top of her. Oh, he found it so adorable the way she did that.
"Don't worry, my dear. I am only getting up to retrieve
something. Just wait patiently," Kissing her gently on the
cheek; he left her side to pick up a couple of objects that had been
enveloped by the darkness of the room. Esmeralda cocked an eyebrow in
curiosity as he made her way back to her. The fireplace lit up what
he was holding: A shiny bottle of some really expensive red wine and
a bunch of juicy, plump purple grapes.
(YOU FORGOT THE CHEEZE, NITWIT!)
Esmeralda's eyes widened. Every nerve on her body jumped up in
anticipation. Frollo held her fiery gaze as he uncorked the bottle.
He ordered to lie back; her arms and legs spread wide open. Who was
she to not consent to that? Lying back, her rambunctious,
raven curls splayed around her head like wild raven vines. She closed
her eyes, a blissful smile upon her face.
(And here it comes!)
A frightened gasp escaped her lips when she felt a light trickle
of liquid drizzle onto her heaving breasts and flat stomach. The gasp
graduated into a husky moan when a hot, slithering tongue imitated
the same motion the liquid had. Her vision was now a tad blurry due
to all the sensations she was experiencing but she managed to make
out a silver head flicking its tongue along her panting and writing
frame.
Frollo's tongue expertly lapped up the wine from her lovely skin.
Coupled with her sweat, he thought she tasted much better than all
the priceless wines in the world combined. He tongued her breasts,
teasing them with his sharp-edged teeth. He would lick and suck one
erect rosebud before blowing on it. The contrasting feeling of the
cold wine and his hot breath on her soft skin was incredible. She
moaned softly, her hands tunneling into his silky, silver hair.
(….
Frollo...
and Esmeralda
Are having a kinky wine orgy...
While nibbling on one hardened rosebud, Frollo guided his hand to
her other, forlorn and ignored breast and cupped it. Esmeralda
immediately leaned into his hand. He squeezed it lightly, weighed it
in his hand before pinching her nipple until she cried out in joy. He
moaned softly in return, loving how perfect her swollen mound felt in
his palm. He broke away from her breasts to kiss down her toned
stomach, sucking up any more excess wine while tasting her own
natural flavor. His hands were kept busy as well.
He slid his wide, slender palms against her inner thighs; his
smirk deepened when he discovered her swollen sex was already peeking
out from her slippery, hot womanly folds, begging for his attention.
No, he would only give her such attention when he knew she so
desperately needed it. His palms trailed sensually up her thighs,
paused at her knees so he could bestow a gentle kiss on each one
before he lifted both her legs up.
(I think I'mma cry for my gangraped childhood here, excuse me
for a moment...
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA)
Such beautiful legs; toned, tanned and fit for dancing. He
imprinted burning, wet kisses upon her sensitive ankles, leaving her
to shiver and hiss. His mouth soon left loving nips and sucks up her
calves before slowly, torturously going up her feminine upper thighs,
mere millimeters away from her pleasure spot. Esmeralda struggled in
his grasp, wanting him to kiss her where she wanted to be kissed. Of
course, who was Frollo to follow such menial orders?
(AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA)
He dropped her legs onto the sheets before cupping her chin and
kissing her deeply and passionately. Esmeralda nearly melted into the
sheets. His entire mouth was warm, sweet and just a little tangy due
to the wine. It amazed her he could just halt everything and focus
solely on her mouth. Finally, he broke apart and picked up the wine
bottle and dripped a little into her open mouth and neck.
(AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA)
They kissed again, tongues tangling, both of them hoping to taste
and drink as much of the ravishing wine as they could. Esmeralda
trembled and moaned, one of her hands toying with his already messy
silver hair while the other was running down his rigid back.
(AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHAHAHAAAAaaahaaaa!!
Okay, now I'm done...)
"Can we put the wine somewhere else?" She inquired,
trying to look innocent while doing so. Frollo smirked and licked
against her neck, earning a gasp before picking up the bottle and
letting it flow slowly over her throbbing and very sensitive clit.
Esmeralda bucked her hips against the sudden sensation of cold wine
against her heated sex. Soon, she moaning like a frenzied harlot as
his tongue vicariously flicked against her drenched bud before
burying itself within her pink folds. His slithering, nimble tongue
probing and thrusting into her darkest, most lurid fantasy left her
trembling tremendously. The combination of her sweet feminine juices
and the tangy taste of fine red wine were tantalizing. Frollo nearly
thought he could eat out of her for hours. Shivering with all her
might, Esmeralda nearly thought she could pass out after she screamed
passionately as an earth-shattering orgasmic wave crashed over her.
(Oh Frollo, you're such a closet romantic, aren't you?)
"Yes, I believe we could put it there," He answered back
jokingly; looking up at her with her juices glistening all over his
mouth and chin. Esmeralda's sweet face took on a devilish smirk. Ooh,
Frollo always knew what was in store for him when that smirk crossed
her innocent countenance. In her huskiest bedroom voice, Esmeralda
corrected him. "I was talking about your private organs."
(… WHAT?!)
The results of that statement were shown almost instantly. A jolt
of searing heat coursed through Frollo's nerves and steeled his
already hardened with arousal manhood almost painfully. He just gaped
at her, not believing what she had just stated. Then again, this
woman knew her way around the bedroom and was possibly the most
seductive temptress known to men. She held his gawking face with her
self-confident smirk, hoping she had hit home with him.
A few minutes later, he was flat on his back and she gripped the
bottle in her hand, a victorious smirk playing across her exotic
features. She allowed the scarlet liquid to flow in rivulets all over
his lean, defined muscles before drenching his fully erect manhood
with the tangy liquid. Now, she could actually relish what she was
getting. He was long, thick and hardened with a fire blazing within
him. What more could a woman ask for?
(… She actually poured wine on his Johnson? Hopefully, some
of the liquid made it into his urethra and the pain makes him WAKE
the fuck UP and realize WHAT HE'S DOING!!)
Her rosy lips soon descended upon him, lapping and sucking every
wine-soaked area. She ran her tongue languidly over his taut nipple
before trailing down into the crevasses and deep lines of muscle. Her
hand lovingly stroked the wet wisps of silver sprouting sparsely from
his chest as she continued licking up all the stray trails of wine.
Frollo was enjoying himself! He moaned deeply every time her hand
would 'accidentally' brush against his hardened arousal. Her mouth
left moist, burnt lip marks across his opalescent skin.
(Like FIRE!
HELLFIRE!
This burning in my BRAIN!
This stupid
Bullshitstorm
Is driving me INSANE!)
Esmeralda observed his swollen, throbbing length with her head
cocked to the side. She rarely did this to a man. She actually found
it disgusting to have a man's slimy cock buried within her throat.
Yet, the very thought of doing something that erotic and sinful to
Frollo left her hot and bothered. She kissed the sensitive tip gently
and was rewarded with a few drops of creamy semen leaking from it.
Licking her lips, she enveloped his moistened cock with her entire
ruby mouth. Frollo groaned and reached down to weave his spindly
fingers into her forest of raging black hair.
(How you know it's a virgin woman who wrote this: pre-cum.
That's one of the most disturbing parts with some fanfics:
PRE-FUCKING-CUM!
There's no such thing as pre-cum! A guy who dumps his load
DUMPS IT ALL AT ONCE! If he's got something leaking outta his Mr
Happy, then it's probably something wrong and he should search
medical attention for it!)
"Oh, Esmeralda…" His moans were longing, rapturous and
deep. "My lovely Esmeralda…my beautiful angel…Ohh…."
(Ooooh, vodka... my one true love... my savior, OOOHH!)
One hand gripping around his thick length, she ran her mouth up
and down his swelling meat. Her soft lips felt heavenly against his
hardness and her darting tongue would lick up all of the hot, creamy
juices as well as the tangy red wine. He was whimpering and bucking
his hips against her mouth, loving her ministrations. He bit his lip
as he concentrated on the ceiling, his entire being thrown into a
pleasurable spiral. At this point, he regretted nothing. Not the
fires. Not the executions. Not even Quasimodo's death. The dancing
girl was his and his to play with now and he did not care for eternal
damnation. If he were to burn in the fires of Hell for this marriage
and these deepening feelings for the gypsy girl, so be it! Just as
long as she was here with him forever.
(And THAT's pretty much what you'r'e gonna do, Casanova!
Besides, since when did he EVER regret the executions, fires OR
Quasimodos death?)
One last, loud, obnoxious suck and he was roaring in ecstasy. His
hips arched off the ground as he buried inside of her warm, inviting
mouth before growling as the warm wetness came gushing out of him.
Esmeralda swallowed it all loudly; an erotic noise that caused him to
harden again almost instantly. She smirked, leaning off him, her pink
tongue lapping his warm juices off her mouth. Such an action sent
another flame coursing through him and he grabbed her before slamming
her into the bed.
"You little witch," He purred, sending her into a warm
state of euphoria. "You shall see how I treat my bride."
With that, he parted her thighs wide enough for him to enter
comfortably. Esmeralda's breath hitched. She could feel his vibrating
tip against her slick opening. Bracing himself with a deep breath,
Frollo slowly sheathed his throbbing member inside of her.
Esmeralda let out a choked gasp. So many times he had entered her
sacred garden and she still marveled at his immense size. He was
thick which intensified the delicious friction between them. He was
bellowing in happiness as he stroked and rubbed himself within her.
They were sensuous decadence at that point, grinding and heaving
against each other. Their mixed moans and bawls of gratification
threatened to drown each other out.
(Oh, and one more thing about human anatomy: A guy who lightens
the load, WON'T get hard immediately again.
AND THE AUTHOR IMAGINES JUDGE FROLLO WITH A HUMONGOSO DICKO!)
"Ugh…yes…harder…don't stop," Esmeralda moaned
breathily. Frollo grunted and slowed down a little, wanting her to
feel every little bit of him. The gypsy gritted her teeth in
satisfaction as he moved nimbly and slowly within her. He would push
in as deeply as she could accommodate his impressive length before
pulling until only his surging tip would remain. He noticed that even
though he was only halfway in, she was already tightening her
feminine folds, trying desperately to draw him in to her and keep him
there.
(Wait, it seems like I've got more crying to do, hang on...
WWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA)
"Patience, my darling, patience…" His deep voice
trailed off, leaving her moaning as he thrust back harder into her.
She gasped and hissed as he pulled out again, teasing her with his
circular motions, stroking against her wet, constricting walls. He
was scratching all her right itches and it was only a matter of time
when she would climax. Already that familiar, tingling heat was
building up within her pussy and it radiated out to all her nerves
and digits, numbing them. She dug her nails into his back before
dragging them downwards, drawing a little blood. Frollo winced at
that but continued ramming into her, determined to bring her over the
brink of heavenly bliss.
(AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIT!
Did she just write ”pussy”? WHAT?! I didn't think that word
existed in this authors vocabulary?! From what I can recall, she's
uses every more sofisticated names for the female's
reproductive organs, but NOW SHE WROTE PUSSY?! LIKE SOME VULGAR
SAVAGE?!)
Esmeralda lifted her legs until they were nearly perpendicular to
her lying frame, hoping that this would cause him to plunge even
deeper within her. He groaned and dragged her hips up to meet him
even closer. Esmeralda was imploding with every raining thrust. He
slipped in and out of her vigorously, not stopping once. She was
flushed, panting, her spine bowed and her head thrown back. Her nails
dug even deeper into his back as her hips willingly followed his
erratic motions.
The orgasm was intensifying, heating up and simmering just below
the surface. Frollo was relentless. He slammed harder and faster
inside of her, relishing her passionate moans of desire and yearning.
His ravenous mouth had buried itself against her neck, licking up her
sweat and kissing her lightly. That little lapping sensation against
her warm neck and the constant driving within her was more than
Esmeralda could bear.
(This has GOT to be the most detailed sex-scene every written
by human hands?! Except for Fifty Shades of Gray, because that entire
book is just one, single, looong sex-scene...)
Her heaving body arched and her nails deeply dug within his back,
Esmeralda came harder than she had ever come in her entire life. The
orgasm rippled towards her feminine, pink walls, causing them to
clamp violently around his throbbing heat as her husky, animalistic
screech of ecstasy echoed through the palace. The climax was so
raging that Esmeralda nearly believed she had wet herself in the
process. She was relieved when she discovered she had simply just
released her steamy wetness all over him. Never had she allowed so
much liquid to escape her though. Not that she cared; she was simply
too satiated and exhausted to care about anything.
(Oh yes, and OF COURSE Esmeralda is a squirter!
I don't get it?! WHY do people write about SQUIRTERS?! It's not
THAT sexy! Seriously, I am a squirter, sad but true, and I can't
have sex in beds because I'll always soil them WAY more than what he
does! Sure, it's not so much that comes out (at least not as much as
some fanfic-writers claims it comes), but afterwards it FEELS like I
fucking wet the bed or something! I fucking HATE it! The only place I
feel comfortable about sex is basically EVERYWHERE ELSE BUT ON A
BED/SOFA/CARSEAT/ANYTHING THAT'S SOFT AND COMFY!
…
AND YOU'RE VERY FUCKING WELCOME FOR THAT PIECE OF PERSONAL
INFORMATION AND NOW YOU'LL NEVER BE ABLE TO UN-KNOW THAT!)
Frollo moaned hoarsely, his face buried inside of her thick,
sweet-smelling hair as he too joined her in climax, the surge of wet
warmth pooling inside of her lovely cavern. A little bit actually
ended up trailing down her thigh. She shivered at the heat she could
feel in the liquid. Finally, he lifted himself off of her and rolled
onto his back next to her, gasping for breath and completely
satisfied.
Looking over to Esmeralda, he smirked at how affected she was
after everything. She was red in the face and desperately trying to
catch her breath. Well, it seemed he had shown her that he could be
much better than all those other, younger men she had been with.
(Ugh...)
There was only one last thing to do.
(He thought as he put on a pair of sunglasses and retrieved a
Neurolizer from under the pillow)
"My dear," He gently tugged her up so she could lie
against his chest. Esmeralda smiled at him, drunken with pleasure
from what she had just experienced. Frollo returned her smile and
plucked a grape from the bunch. He gingerly fed it to her. She bit
into the grape, relishing the exotic sweetness that exploded onto her
taste buds as the juices ran freely into her mouth. Mmm, delicious.
(But not as delicious as the sperm of a fucking ancient old
man, eh?! Fml...)
"Now come here," He purred seductively, popping a grape
into his own mouth before dragging her down into the covers.
Esmeralda sighed. Dear God, this man was insatiable!
Not that she was complaining.
(BUT I AM COMPLAINING!)
A/N: Oh my, that was hot to write. I wish they invented chocolate
during this time. It would make everything more…decadent. (SAYS
THE ONE WHO GAVE A MIEDEVAL GYPSY INDOOR PLUMBING!)
Alright, I'll leave you alone with your molested childhood and
eye-bleach, while I go cut my eyes out with my The Hunchback of Notre
Dame-DVD...
By the way, WHY do they think Frollo is SEXY?! If there's any guy that's sexy in that movie, it's Quasimodo!
I mean, just look at this hunk!
I JUST WANNA HUMP THE FUCK OUTTA THAT HUMP!
You don't happen to like wine, do you Quasi?
Or vodka?
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